I like that it was simple. The music and the way the shots were filmed and arranged reminded me a LOT of .hack//sign. I would avoid close-ups on the flashing lights though.
Don't really have a critique to share. Transitions were great. Music choice was great. All the shots conveyed what you were going for in the video. Awesome job.
Really great use of transitions, the shots all blend together very well. Nice variety of wide, medium, and close angles. The music captures the vibe perfectly. A few shots were a little shaky, use of a tripod would have been beneficial. Great video!
I like how you were really close in your shots, it made me feel as if i was there. I love the rain and find it to be very peaceful. The music went well with the video and it flowed quite nicely.
it had a lot of nice shoots and when it faded in to another shot it was well done as was the fading out for the ending but it could have used more fad into form one shoot to the next because sharp transitions don't site the emotion.
Beautifully shot. Well timed. Great score. I enjoyed this very much!
ReplyDeleteGreat shots of the water, along with music choice.
ReplyDeleteI like that it was simple. The music and the way the shots were filmed and arranged reminded me a LOT of .hack//sign. I would avoid close-ups on the flashing lights though.
ReplyDeleteThe scenes and music go very well together creating just as the title states, serenity.
ReplyDeleteGreat video i really liked the way the video ended, the transition with the music went really good.
ReplyDeleteDon't really have a critique to share. Transitions were great. Music choice was great. All the shots conveyed what you were going for in the video. Awesome job.
ReplyDeleteThe video was definitely serene, and it had great shots of a city at night. The music was relaxing and went well with the video.
ReplyDeleteReally great use of transitions, the shots all blend together very well. Nice variety of wide, medium, and close angles. The music captures the vibe perfectly. A few shots were a little shaky, use of a tripod would have been beneficial. Great video!
ReplyDeletethe contrast between shots of the urban area and water really carried your emotion through to the viewer.
ReplyDeleteI like how you were really close in your shots, it made me feel as if i was there. I love the rain and find it to be very peaceful. The music went well with the video and it flowed quite nicely.
ReplyDeleteit had a lot of nice shoots and when it faded in to another shot it was well done as was the fading out for the ending but it could have used more fad into form one shoot to the next because sharp transitions don't site the emotion.
ReplyDeleteI like how you faded from one clip to another and used transitions in time with the music. The shot with the flowing water felt calm.
ReplyDeleteI am sending this on for broadcast to WNIT's Arts Codec program. Great work.
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